Benjamin Cain
1 min readSep 1, 2020

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Oh, so you said the article is "full of hyperbolic statements," but you didn't actually read the article.

I just strolled through one of your articles, called “Solidarity.” The first sentence is ungrammatical, especially since you don’t place “Why” in italics; what you mean to say is, “Whether we all pull together is more important than the reasons we might offer for doing so.” The article’s second sentence should have “solidarity” in quotation marks, since you’re mentioning rather than using that word. Scrolling down a little, you say “Well here in lies the litmus test.” What you mean is, “Well, herein lies the litmus test.”

Forgive me if I don’t take advice on writing from someone who writes at a high school level.

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Benjamin Cain
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